原发布者:赵秋成
英语演讲比赛评委点评It'sterrifictoseeyoudressformallyandwellpreparedforthespeech,andyourposteriswelldoneaswell.however,youneedtomakemoreeyecontactwiththeaudienceandbetterspeakwithvarioustonesandclearpronunciation.Ihavetosayyouareabitstiffwithoutproperbodylanguage,whichisnogoodforimpressingtheaudienceandthejury.Moreover,Ireallyhopeyoucanputmorepassionintothespeechandtrytoenrichitwithmorefacialexpression,thensurelyyourspeechwouldbefabulous.演讲中没有语法错误，尤其其中一个男孩讲的非常好，他演讲的开头很好，而且很幽默，演讲有激情，并且和观众有很好的眼神交流并且在演讲中有适当的肢体语言yourgrammarisok.It'sworthmentioningthataboygaveafantasticspeechwithanimpressivebeginning,furthermore,hewasfairlyhumorousandenthusiasticthroughoutthespeech,andhemadegoodeyecontactwiththeaudienceandusedappropriatebodylanguageinthespeech.