| One possible version Good morning, ladies and gentlemen. Some of us are having problems with our parents, as they often look into our school bags or read our diaries. I fully understand why we are not comfortable about it, but there’s no need to feel too sad. Our parents are checking our bags or diaries to make sure we’re not getting into any trouble. They have probably heard some horrible stories about other kids and thought we might do the same. Or perhaps they just want to connect with us but are dong it all wrong. My suggestion is: Tell them we want them to trust us as much as we’d like to trust them. If you don’t think you can talk to them, write them a letter and leave it lying around—they are bound to read it. Thank you! |
| 本文是一篇演讲稿，也是一篇半开放性的作文。所涉及内容与学生的生活实际联系紧密，学生有话可说，雹陪橡在源旁写之前，要仔细谋篇布局，陈述现象，提出自己的建议。要选择高级词汇如comfortable，be bound to do sth，也要使乱塌用高级的句型，如there’s no need to do sth;个人建议部分可以建议使用信件等。 |
