Today I went for a outing with my friends. We met at school gate at 8:00 in the morning. We went to XXX（经常爬的山的名字，单词的首字母要大写）by bike. On the way we were so excited that we sang loudly. When we arrived, we cilmbed the hill at once. We had a pinic on the top of the hill. Then we walked down the path and had a rest. Some girls danced under the tree. Some boys played cards. We didn't go back until 4 p.m.. We were very tired but very happy. What a wonderful day!
1. 日记帮你写了一篇，但是请你参考，不要原搬照抄。其实很多地方换一下词就是你自己的文章了。
2. 作为一个英语老师，你的这种做法我不赞成，希望你能自己努力多看书、多做练习；网络固然和方便，但是学习只有方法、没有捷径。
3. 希望你学习进步！
