what is evidently portrayed in illustration above is that描述图想问一些英语大神

这是写考研的大作文。这句话可以用，但是有些瑕疵，应该是 What is evidently portrayed in the illustration above is that ...。illustration是特指，需要加定冠词。
其实写法很多，例如：
The above picture tells us that ...
We can see from the picture above that ...

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